tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7442418216973639999.post8360674901251289983..comments2011-11-21T12:05:25.882-08:00Comments on LOR 101 McDaniel: Finding a Circulating Bookamachttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14936561105401986045noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7442418216973639999.post-35874072648592343432011-11-21T12:05:25.882-08:002011-11-21T12:05:25.882-08:00YAY! 25/25YAY! 25/25Lilia Murrayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05843958311373855616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7442418216973639999.post-63911745783578895232011-10-31T13:58:16.347-07:002011-10-31T13:58:16.347-07:00Great! You just still need to add the 'ed'...Great! You just still need to add the 'ed' to "checked-out" in the 2nd paragraph: "Also, circulating books are allowed to be "checked-out" and can leave the library, unlike reference books."Lilia Murrayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05843958311373855616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7442418216973639999.post-8772868009553264232011-10-24T18:27:35.629-07:002011-10-24T18:27:35.629-07:00Again, a very nice post, Amanda. I like how you e...Again, a very nice post, Amanda. I like how you explained the failure of one search with the success of another. Yes, oftentimes you need to search with other terms or broaden the search. (As a side note: have you thought about including QR codes in your paper? They're everywhere in advertising right now) <br /><br />You just have some grammatical revisions to do:<br /><br />Change punctuation and verb tense in: "Citations and in-depth information were essential to the research paper; therefore, a circulating book was more preferable than a reference book. Also, circulating books are allowed to be "checked-out" and can leave the library, unlike reference books."<br /><br />Fix spelling in: "For each search I performed, I selected the "Location" to circulating collection and the "Type" to book."<br /><br />Change verb tense in: "I kept the first search box the same with "Advertising" and changed "non traditional" to "digital." <br /><br />Rephrase to: "Since reference books are not allowed to leave the library, they are more likely to be available."<br /><br />Change verb tense in: "A green check will be located below the call number if the book is available and a red "X" will show if the book is not available and already checked-out by another person."Lilia Murrayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05843958311373855616noreply@blogger.com